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We're Not So Beautiful by ~heartshaped-b0x:iconheartshaped-b0x:



We’re not so beautiful as we seem;
All those moonlit people floating
Along the roadside, caught in the current
Of the night air-- damp, like
Breathing rain-- and moving like celestial ice that dusts
The trail of a shooting star.
We’re not so pastorally serene--
The lightness of the autumn sun
In our hair, glistening like the hay and
The long grass beyond-- when hidden under crisp air
In layers of quilting and blankets.
We’re not so much the proper ladies-- velvet and
Prim, resting precariously on soft cushions--
With our colors like petals and the sands of beaches
That go on for miles and miles.

No, we’re not made so perfectly romantic as literature;
Lines serve us better when they’re made with words, and each curve and angle is viewed
Best through eyes that remain shut.  We’re tired and stretched and too loud inside--
At a loss for peace except for in the vanished dreams that draw out long faces--
We’re too much the reality the world has grown accustomed to hiding.
We’re not so beautiful as we seem.
©2007-2009 ~heartshaped-b0x
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I had a explanation here, but then I got tired of it.

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oohhh. so true! Why are you so gooooood at this!? i <3 u, u know that?


man, whit with the art and you with the poetry... i feel so un-artsy.
I don't know! I just look at things and words come into my head, it's how I think! I bet you would feel very artsy if you would post your writing... let me read something of yours for ONCE! :p

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"You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star."

--Friedrich Nietzsche
p.s.- I <3 U toooooooooooo!

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"You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star."

--Friedrich Nietzsche
but i'm... uhh.... me.
FOOL OF A TOOK

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"You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star."

--Friedrich Nietzsche
:D

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"You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star."

--Friedrich Nietzsche

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